helpless she was
how much she missed him
this story is true
its from way back in time
the time when there were no cords to connect
to allow her to say a few words to her lover
deep in love, how lonely she felt
staying awake, dreaming to be in his arms
she sat one night under the blanket of stars
up in the sky the moon smiled back to her
the wind blowing softly caressed her skin
offering her to be her messenger to him
brushing her body, it started to travel
carrying the scent of her body to her lover
to whisper to him, her poems of love
to embrace him in its warmth
making him feel connected to the one
sitting far away yearning for his love
Beautiful analogy,
Wind , connect , Love
expressed
Simply Awesome
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Its a true story..
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What do you mean by true story, kindly explain….
I have less common sense…. hehehe
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Lol.. this whole poem is based upon a true experience when a lover felt lonely and thought to send the wind as a messenger to his lover who was far away.. long long time back when there was no internet and even phones were rare..
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You have experienced this , you mean to say….
Can’t believe
OMG…..
am i right this time…
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Hahaha… it could be someone very close as well
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I didn’t get you…
You mean she has shared experience with you and you wrote a poem on that narration….
Am i getting right ?
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I want you to make your imagination
fly
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That’s very bad, I didn’t knew you are so mean….
I am curious …. hehehe….
Okey leave it….
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Hehehe.. lol
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I have no choice, but to surrender and pretend to Laugh with you…..
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🙂 why pretend… laugh with your whole heart
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Sure !😊 Ok trying….
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🙂
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😊😊😊
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Beautiful
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Great job,friend!:)
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Thanks a lot my dear
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❤ ❤ ❤ I can't say enough about how much I love this poem. There was a time when I had to be away from my husband for a long amount of time with little communication, and this captured that feeling.
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So far, all your posts I have read have touched me very deeply. I’ve cried reading all of them. Thank you for writing such meaningful things, no matter how heartwrenching they are. 🙂 x
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O Dear… how kind of you. Your words have touched me so deep here. Tears of joy filled my eyes as I read your comment here!
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You have a way with words and emotions making people feel your poetry and it’s greatness. Everything you write is well written and so heartfelt, Love you.
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I am truly honored with such beautiful words of yours my dear
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Well they are true, lovely
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