I wonder if the storm be a little orderly
would it be not so loud, so harsh
would it be a little less destructive
would the wind decrease its massive flow
would the tide rise not that high
If only the storm was a little orderly
would it not make the buildings to fall
would it not gulp lives too many
would a little more be spared from its wrath
If only the storm was a little orderly
the bridges may develop a few cracks
yet they won’t break completely
they would still allow the cars to pass
If only the storm was a little orderly
I would still find my wife and children back
for they wouldn’t end up being in the storm’s mouth
I would still find them standing under the tree
waiting for me
only if the storm was a little orderly
the storm sure, would loose its power
the power to become gigantic
It wouldn’t have turned into a STORM at all
If only the storm had learnt
to be a little orderly
#poetry #storm #orderly
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sure, thanks a lot!
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Unfortunately the storms in our lives are disorderly, unless we can see behind the scenes. Then they are totally orderly. 😉
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Rightly said.. Beautiful
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You are professional writer , I believe
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I would love to become so…
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You will become soon.
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May your words come true..
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Yeah they will come true very soon, I trust your ability. I can them.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome.
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Alas! They are not dear. Beautiful poem, full of hope.
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Thanks Indira.. You are right, they are not.. But still hope is our biggest savior.
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So true.
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Love the painting! Interesting poem!
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I am glad you do my dear!
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Oh my! I really like your poems! ❤ This is no exception
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Wow.. such beautiful words of praise… I am honored… Really
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The pleasure is all mine
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