it was her, just her …. a woman
made love to a man for she was his wife
started to experience another life inside
her womb was a bit more sensitive now
her belly increased a little every moment
another heart started to beat inside her
she truly became a woman with two hearts
life grew inside each day every moment
one after the other all the senses came to life
inside her womb, the baby started to hear
she even cried at times she smiled
kicked a few goals sucked on her thumb
nine months advanced, it was time for the finale
anxiety & excitement both filled the woman
for the pain so intense, unable to bear
her muscles stretched and loosened with each contraction
o heaven!! come out fast, she told the baby
hours of pushing and screaming and heavy breathing
finally, she could hear her first cry
tears of excitement filled her eyes
even before placenta could relieve her frame
she had forgotten already the excruciating pain
in that moment she felt complete
held the tiny soul in her arms, watched her crying
she offered her breast to the tiny mouth
the baby first struggled then started to suckle
that’s when the woman became a mother
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Beautiful. 🙂 I like that the baby ‘kicked a few goals’ 🙂
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lol… must be a football fan.. thanks for reading!!
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haha – my pleasure 🙂
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happy Monday!!
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I hope your Monday is happy also. Thank you
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🙂
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You have given perfect narration , how from woman to be mother, loved ,
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Thanks Nisthur.. You are always very supportive and kind.
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Your kindness is being reflecting , within in You . My comments are just medium.
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Another beautiful and comforting comment from you
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I am comfortable , seeing you in comfortable.
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🙂
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Tender, sensitive and beautiful journey! Awesome!!
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Thank you Meenakshi.. Only a woman can understand it the best way…
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Yes! After reading your post I’m even proud to be one 🙂
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wow.. YOU made my day.. We must be proud.. we are the women who can spread love, who can take care of their families selflessly, who can bring joy and happiness to our children..
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YESsss!!! 😊
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Full of Emotion and Touching Feelings,& Best One Zigyasa ji
That’s Why Women Are Great Chahe Wo Kisi Bhi Roop Maan-Bahan-Beti-Wife…….?Kyun Na Hon,Heads-Off.
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I thank you for giving so much honor to women Sagar ji.. Women are special in every way, in every relation.. they hold love inside and are ready to shower the same on their family..
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This is soo natural and I hold this post close to my heart. This post is celebrating womanhood, CHEERS to that…!!!
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True my dear… The journey from being someone’s lady to be a mother… Oh that feeling of holding your baby for the first time.. heavenly… Thanks a lot for reading!
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In love with this piece! /KB
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Thanks love… A woman’s journey is indeed beautiful…
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Awww,explains beautifully from struggles of a woulb be mommy to the happiness of holding her new born .Lovely it is
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Thanks a my dear
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lovely
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Thank you Dear
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A very nice descriptive piece! Loved the imagery!
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Thanks a lot my dear!
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