green girl emerges in the jungle
long hair kissing her knees
divine body covered in leaves
fragrant as if bathed in flowers
glowing face with eyes blue green
her manner graceful like a queen
she holds the sun in one hand
in the other she holds the moon
showering the life in the jungle
with light, making it serene
trees bend their branches in honor
as she walks her elegant way
an army of all sorts of animals
follow their queen in silence
a sight so charmingly delightful
when the green girl emerges in the jungle
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this is a beautiful piece. thank you for sharing
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thanks to you for reading…
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That is such a … clean and pure piece of poetry – no complications or obscure words – thanks for sharing that. 🙂
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your welcome… i try to keep the words simple all the time… my vocabulary is not too rich…
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where poetry is concerned, a rich vocabulary can obfuscate (make obscure, unclear, or unintelligible) the meaning. I think you have pitched this perfectly. 🙂
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🙂
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Reblogged this on mySestina and commented:
green girl has emerged
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Lovely. One can easily imagine the sight. 🙂
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I am glad you could… divine
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Very beautiful piece I love the imagery.
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Thanks Rabia.. Thats indeed the nature girl.. she has to be the most beatuiful one..
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You’re welcome. Very beautiful. The picture is so mystical
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Thank you again.. I had to make an effort to find this one…
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You’re welcome! Well worth the effort 🙂
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So glad !
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Thank you for sharing this amazing beauty. I love this poem it is truly lovely. Very well expressed the words are like a sweet desert it gets better with every bite.
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and so are your comments my dear.. such beautiful words you use to express..
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My comments are not as Beautiful as your poetry. Your poetry melts hearts it us superb and admired. 🙂
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Kisses and Hugs to you lovely lady.. keep smiling!
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So serene ,she seem to be mother nature .As far as simple words are ,i too get worried sometimes as my posts are written using very simple words 😦
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I had the same feeling. I use simple words always and thought if people would like it or not. But then i guess, we all have our own style of writing and we must never be shy or scared about it.
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Now thats something totally agree 🙂 ,thank you for solving my utmost concern
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you are so sweet my dear!
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Hahaha,again feelings are mutual zigs
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