emerging …. fading
standing up …. at times bending
smiling …. weeping
building up …. shattering
holding …. abandoning
healing …. bleeding
consuming the knowledge …. sometimes ignoring
mine …. yours …. souls performing
a play, named …. the circle of life
Brilliant!
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the circle of life… isn’t it
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Yes, It is…
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so are we.. you, me, everyone.. for we make it complete
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How beautiful u write. Makes one introspect
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and how beautiful of you to grasp it.. exactly the way i thought
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🙂 your writings make me happy
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so glad i am to perform
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I would also love your thoughts and feedback on my latest post. Would mean a lot
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you got it
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Awaiting for ur comments
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what mistake did i do
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Nice. Sometimes it hurts to be part of the circle, so I often find myself gaurding.
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it does hurt Jim.. somehow I have started to enjoy my pain as it seems to be a necessary part of my life
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it is a part of our life. And it’s good for us to accept it as soon as possible than running from it. 😃
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Rightly said Sumit…
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I agree. It gives us something to write about doesn’t it.
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True my dear friend.. it sure does.. it makes us creative
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It’s just 21 and I think I’ve roamed around the cycle of life already. 🙂
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woah… really? so early to say that my dear
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Umar se pehle Zindagi apne rang dikha de to esa hee hota hain Didi. 😊
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I understand my Dear… do not worry, life had many great things in store as well..
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