tell me
was it too much to ask
if I asked for just a little smile
a spark of just a little happiness in my eyes
you knew my journey till now was exhausting
you knew I was desperate for some rest
you knew enough tears I had shed
you knew your love would have strengthen me
you knew I loved you, gave my life to you
how could you be so heartless to desert me
how could you just let me die every moment
O my dear, tell me where did I fail, how did I fail
after all that I genuinely did to save our relationship
tell me my dearest
was it too much to ask
Amazing writing like always… I got sad and touched by your poem! Very emotional but in good way
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O my Dear… i was sad while writing this… you have pulled me out of pain… this is so amazing, how kind words could do wonders to us… Thanks a lot!!
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Amazing, Tawadhi Feelings Bhot Wadhiya Hain Zigyasa Kakkar ji.
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o ji Sagar ji… thankyou ji…same to you
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Funny But Ik Waar Phir Tun Welcome Zigyasa ji.
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hahahah
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Reblogged this on mySestina.
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No it wasn’t too much to ask for. Sometimes people just dont seem to undrstand no matter how hard you try. Sometimes you just need to tell what you feel right on their face. I enjoyed reading your post. Please do check out my blog https://ephemeralexistence.wordpress.com/2016/05/22/pain/
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Thank you for your kindness my dear… for sure to check your wonderful thoughts on your blog…
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You deserve love. It will come to you at its best timing
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Thank you my dear
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