two sisters – unborn
dreaming together in the womb
holding each other’s hand
fondly in love, even before birth
sharing the sack
the fluid they gulped into their lungs
sharing every thought, each moment
be it happiness, pain or love
flawlessly playing their part
blooming a relationship wonderful
the sisters finally took birth
still unaware of the sadness of the world
sigh..
the cruel teachings of the inhumane
made them part their path
for one of them grew up as Ms. Grace
the other was named Ms. Envy
need more to be told of this story?
how two loving souls
doomed
to turn forver
into enemies
Hope to see you here
https://zerocreativity0.wordpress.com/2016/06/29/sun-photography-poetry-on-sun/
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okie
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thanks!
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I like this poem.
The beginning made me quite sad. My aunt and uncle were expecting twins but they were in the same sack. It’s actually very dangerous. They strangled themselves with their umbilical chords when they were kicking and moving around. Quite sad. )-:
But, good poem.
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Oh, I am sorry my dear! I chose the theme to throw light on how the kids are being raised now a days.. How, we are not giving them values of life and making them follow an undesirable path.. Thank you for sharing your thoughts my dear
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don’t be sorry! i understand your meaning. It’s just that’s what flashed in my head. You were very descriptive and I imagined that’s how they were in the womb- friends with each other.
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I am so glad you liked it my dear!! Thanks a ton!
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I love your style, its so swift and well articulated
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And… I am honored.. thank you so much my dear
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Zigyasa your poems are so thoughtful, that’s why I love your works so much! – Michelle
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Hey Michelle!! Thanks a lot darling.. You know these are all my observations on paper.. We all need to change so many things to lead to a better world.. A lot of change is required and we must start for it now. I wish to see a world where we only would need to write about the good things for there would be nothing negative to think about.. Amen
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Amen! Don’t we all wish for such a world to exist? I believe it will one day ^^
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I hope for the same too my Dear
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Lovely
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Thanks love
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I love your images too…
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Thanks a lot my dear
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Lovely like always
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wow as usual
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Thank you Parveen ji
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This is so beautiful.
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Thank you so much for reading
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Wow! Very powerful.
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Thank you my dear
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Amazing and strange,
Beautiful.
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Thanks Nish
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😊
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