the dullness in the morning
birds failed to chirp
why is there no breeze
could someone palpate this anxiety
the puffiness under her eyes
narrates the story of the previous night
how the darkness
secretly crawled into the sunlight
making it gloomy
what you are up Zigyasa. This supersonic speed of writing posts with such diverse topics full of your virgin ideas is going to achieve new horizons every day, every minute, every second and every moment. Love you for the treat
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The best compliment Parveen ji.. thank you much. You are very kind.
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Love the diction
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Thanks love
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This gives me a picture of someone who can’t sleep because it was too hot. I really like the line about the darkness secretly crawling into the sunlight…that is how it feels when you know you have a busy day coming, but are not able to relax enough to fall asleep..the closer to day it gets the more anxious you feel about how tired you are going to be as you try to get through your day! You captured that feeling really well. I even thought that the night was so long that the birds were never going to sing! This one was really an awesome pictorial for me of a sleepless night!
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Dear Charlene, You amaze me how you take me to a journey about each one of my posts in such a beautiful way. You make me think about my own posts again. You make me realize much more hidden in those words, that I didn’t even think of while writing them. You show me so many other aspects of the poems that I write. I am so thankful to have you come up with your thoughts my dear. You are simply awesome.
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You are so kind…I enjoy your posts and the interaction with you very much. Thank you.
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Same here Charlene.. I just love interacting with you
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