I stood in silence
witnessing my heart breaking
pieces falling to the ground
like a broken glass
spilling my blood all around…
I tried to gather them all
like a puzzle, I struggled to put them together
it pained as I couldn’t find a way
just couldn’t bring them to my heart’s shape
even after countless attempts – I failed… I failed
now I am here
I am here to ask you for the key
to help me, Un-break my heart
to make it whole once again
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🔑
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Being physical
means
Perishable
Nothingness
is ever eternal
If you heart
can be broken
become the love
Which is immortal
serve the world
even you are
broken
find the divine
In each human
feel the bliss
Within you
only medicine
so far I knew
broken pieces
can never be whole
know that
you are beautiful soul 😊
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And you write so beautifully… wow
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Learnt from you, is it not I am quick learner ?
My reply is an effort to make your heart immortal un-breakable ever bliss ful.
Though both reply and poem are fiction. I know but when you sell only fiction I have no option left but to buy the same.
Lots of appreciation for your poem, keep writing !
Happy Sunday !😊
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Your appreciation inspires me always.. You are such a great writer and I really enjoy your poems. With much thanks always.. a happy Sunday to you too..
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I am having content to express but very bad in expressing it as writer.
But people like you supports me even though. Because they all are humble and kind like you.
Can’t thank enough !😊
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All great writers think of themselves not being capable but they are the ones who bring a lot of encouragement to other’s lives.. You are fantastic in each way Nish. I am a big fan of you and you know it…
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Thanks of your appreciation. No doubt your words make me feel good.
You are wonderful soul too !😊
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This is such an inspiring poem Nisthur. Thank you so much. I’m gonna take a screenshot of it. It really inspired me. 😊😊
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Isn’t he absolutely wonderful Sumit… I am always inspired by his words, be it comments or his own posts… Nish, you have a lot of people who get inspired by you… Keep going.
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Wow , I am glad you have got the essence of the poem and you inspired from it.
Thanks a ton for being a part of blogging world.
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Thanks to you
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😊
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I love the purity of of poems Didi.it really has some deep meaning in it. 😃
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Thankyou so much my dear Sumit…
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Thanks sumit for wonderful gesture !😊
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Powerful piece
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🙂
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Beautiful poem.
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Thanks a lot my dear!
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Don’t cry, it is just a poem. I have to tell myself. I love your poetry. I love how you can play with such strong emotions. Well done, and keep up the writing.
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Awww.. yes dear Richard.. it is just a poem.. You always honor me with such beautiful comments.. I am so thankful to you.
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Beautifully written
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Thanks a lot!
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Nice Creation.
Zigyasa ji.
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again thanks a lot Sagar ji.. aap ka shukriya
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Un break my heart, ive enjoyed reading it
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I am so glad you did… Thanks for reading.
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the art of mending broken hearts is a fine, specialised job…but then, most hearts have a knack of mending themselves w/o any external help… nice post
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Beautifully said by you.. most hearts have a knack of mending themselves without any external help…
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hmm…so true ma’am (pse read my ‘the art of stealing hearts post – when free)
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Sure my dear.. please give me the link
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https://myheartbeats4ublog.wordpress.com/2016/03/24/my-fourth-heartbeat/
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