staring down through the depth of the building
She sat on the top most floor
her situation unfathomable
incapable to consider any solutions
she felt all her power evaporating
her legs trembled, felt empty
shiver ran through her spine
as she struggled to decide
to jump, or not to jump
and she did
but on the other side
to live
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image source : google
Both a risk, as delineated by you prose. I wish many more had the wherewithal to choose the risk of living. Lovely post, I hope that was not you on the real roof there (photo), not the poetic roof.
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No my dear. That’s not me.. a work of fiction… you are right in saying that choosing to live is a healthy choice.
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Wow. Powerful Zig
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Indeed
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Very nice. All your poems really do well with conveying emotion and reality
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I try to keep them real and emotional. I am glad you feel so my dear..
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Life is a struggle. It takes great courage to choose to live. Choosing death is easy. It means you’ve given up.
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Right.. that’s why, jump not to die but to live…
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☺
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Please don’t jump, choose life, just saying 😊, enjoyed reading your poem!
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Yes my dear.. jumping on the other side to choose life…
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you’re gifted. you really have a way with words.
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I am glad you chose to drop in such inspiring words my dear.. Thanks a lot
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So inspiring and beautiful Zigs 🙂
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Thanks Anamika dear
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She could be the brokenhearted girl from my Haiku. Lol!
Good thing she changed her mind…At least this one’s a happy ending. 🙂
Now seriously, this is very written-poem…Finding that one hope that kept her alive and the courage to believe in that hope.
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What a connection.. She could be that girl my dear.. Yes, she lived as she thought that she could get a better guy than the one who asked about her friend!
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Now that’s positive thinking! 😊
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Not to jump! A single minute can turn anyone’s life around. This world has a lot of surprises. There is always light at the end of the tunnel. Always. All it takes is for you to open your eyes to see the light. Never close your eyes and accept the darkness! 🙂 I like this poem because many people are in situations like this.
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Yes my dear.. Many people are there in this situation and i wish they end up choosing life over the end..
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Hoo tat pic a v scary,tats the motivational part,the ending.
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it is indeed scary!
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Emotional Blackmailing But Nice One.Zigyasa ji.
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hmm.. thankyou sagar ji
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Most Welcome Zigyasa ji.
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