If only you had caressed my face softly
if only you had held my hand
if only you had kissed me gently
things would have been different today
if only you had a small corner for me
in your heart, if only you had allowed me to stay
if only you could see my invisible tears
things would have been different today
if only you hadn’t abandoned me in pain
if only you could hear my silent screams
if only you had offered me yourself
things would have been different today
if only you had understood my song
I wouldn’t be writing these words of pain
I would be singing my poems of joy
in your arms I would have been enjoying
if only my love.. if only
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Powerful lines and amazing piece
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Your poem spoke to me. 🙁 You’ve written it really well. You inspired me to write few lines of my own:
If only the words of heart were visible-
to the mere eyes of a person,
Rather bathed in ignorance, and,
They say ignorance is bliss.
Perhaps this quote had an unusual effect,
On the path chosen by the one loved while, The one loving was lost forever
Derailed onto a path full of misfortune,
but nevertheless,
Misfortune maybe Fortune in disguise.
~ Shambhavi
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Shambhavi… this is really amazing. You write so well my dear. I Loved the way you expressed the emotion here. Just amazing… keep writing my dear.
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Thank you Zigyasa. Your writing caries lot of emotions and I am glad I could decipher few. Your writing has always inspired me. Continue on this path my dear and rise up like a star so bright in the sky. ^_^
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Your beautiful comments have always enlightened my spirit. Your support means a lot to me and I feel inspired to receive your feedback. You write beautifully and I wiuld love to read more from you.
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Yours too my dear. 🙂 Same pinch! 😊😊
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❤️❤️
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Nice:)
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Thanks a lot my dear
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Touching piece of art every line is written to perfection my love you’ve once again have amazed me
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Aww, You are so sweet my dear
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Blessings to you 🙂
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To you too my dear
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If only love is what the media portrayed,
the rest of us would be ecstatic.
If only love is something easy,
then it is not worth it.
Because love is something to fight for.
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you said it right.. love is something to fight for…
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