deep inside the womb
her eyes still dreaming
then came the time
to see the world
took her courage immense
to push through a tiny passage
her soft fleshy head
and then came the moment
her cries announced her arrival to the world
puffy little eyes were still shut
wondering where she was
as she felt the softness of a kiss
divine on her forehead
slowly she opened her tiny eyes
confirming her mother’s presence
with a blank stare so brief
she smiled a little
then closed her eyes again
to dream
Omg ❤ omg ❤ omg ❤
Wow ! Loved this one 💟💟💟
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Omg… you just made my day… love
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No , lack of words to compliment this beauty ❤ take a bow lady ❤
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Oooh… this is the second bow my lady…. love you to the core
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Hehe ❤ keep writing and I will keep on falling in love with your words ❤
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ditto my girl
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😘
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Awesome!… aptly captured, mySestina…
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Thank you my Dear… Women can very much relate to the moment described here…
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Indeed! so true…
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Nice One,Her Di Te “Her” Gal Changi Hegi,Zigyasa ji.Rabb Kare Unadi Sari Wishes Pooriyan Hon.
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Thank you Sagar ji.. Tussi Great ho
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Ur Welcome Zigyasa ji ,Great Loqan Nal Reh Unadi Greatness Da Asar Hega Zigyasa ji.
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very cute
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this one is for you…
dard-e-dil ne jab dee thee gawahi
adalat mein us roz
har shaqs roya
gawaah roya, gunehgaar roya
us roz, zarra zarra roya
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Waah Bahut Umda,But Wakeel ko Chod Zigyasa ji.
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hahahah… usse aap add kar lo
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Agar Kiya To Aapka Behtreen Kalam Kharab ho Sakta hai,Zigyasaji.
Apni Biradari ko Bachana Padta Hai Na Zigyasa ji.
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hahahaha….
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Zindagi Mein Samjho Us Din Aapne Bahut Kuch Kama(Earn)Kar Liya Agar Aapne Kisi Ko Hansa Kar Khush Kar Diya.Thanks Zigyasa ji.
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sahi kaha Sagar ji…
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Ek Baar Phir se Aapka Shukriya Zigyasa ji.
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So beautiful! It brought back memories of my son’s birth.
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I am glad you felt so… must be a life changing moment.. cheers to all the mothers and the babies
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Wonderful! This made remember a special time that I had five times, and why I had that moment five times. all their own stories. beautifully written
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wow.. lucky you… 5 times.. God bless
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I can only imagine these moments. You brought them for life for me.
‘confirming her mother’s presence
with a blank stare..’ – lovely lines
End was even better, hopes and dreams.
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Thanks a lot Nikhil… it is a beautiful moment for a mother for the baby to see her briefly… it builds a bond
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Only a mother can know that. Children don’t remember na..
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i don’t think so… they are too young to remember
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I have some when from which I relate to the stories my family tell me. Otherwise I don’t remember anything. ☺
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🙂
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Why that ‘I don’t think so…’?
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This is so beautiful. …
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Thank you so much Isabella… how a mother can understand that blank stare
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Biryh is a great mistery … a wonderfull happening … a new life … but what a shock it must be for the babies!
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True.. they must be so astonished to see this world..
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Marvelous Zig
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Love this! X
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