napping inside the womb of the skull
many sisters taking a little time to flourish
my heart hums their beautiful names
imagination, fascination, creativity
curiosity, passion, enchantment
sometimes they could get a little out of control
they are like prisoners controlled by a Jailer
that Jailer happens to be my Brain
forcing me to learn of the consequences
teaching me patience, asking me to be sober
but this crazy heart of mine, it wants to fly
my thoughts seem caged, wanting to soar high
getting out of control, sometimes a little shy
how I truly wonder sometimes
isn’t my mind An Open Jail
Wonderful poem !
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Hey Shreya… Thanks a lot.. I am sure you could relate to like it so much.. are we not all in the same boat…
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Indeed, we all are ! Admist a never ending battle between heart and mind .
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Yea, true.. we are so alike.. I am sure we will go a long way together, given our thoughts being so similar 🙂
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Aah ,yes ! I’m gradually discovering your blog, looking forward to see more of you on wordpress, would like to hear your views too : )
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Sure thing my dear.. will check yours as well.. I am already excited about that
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Haha, I’m excited to hear from you as well
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you got it
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Simply superb, a jail that opens our conscience, rationality, humanness! well said 😃
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Thankyou Kamakhya ji
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A lovely poem. Looks indeed like My mind is ‘an open jail.’
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True.. all our minds are open Jails… Thanks for reading
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An impeccable show down of Mind being in control over us (Jailer) and this happens so mainly because of the worldly happening around us forcing our needs to be of a higher priority than our wants. Very well written Zig!! – Cezane
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You really have grasped what I truly meant while writing this piece… Thanks Cezane..
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Wonderful work!
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Thanks again..
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