saying piercing painful words
making an argument not valid
displeasure filled his eyes
as he woke up to leave
to walk out of the door
leaving her heartbroken
tears running down her cheeks
she was desperate to run behind
catch hold of his hand
not let him walk out of the wooden door
how convinced was her heart
he will never return once gone
for he didn’t believe in a pretty heart
rather
he chose to fall for a pretty face
Lovely!!
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Very touching. Once again I could feel the emotions! I’ve come to know your writing style. When I see a post I can read it and I know if it’s yours or not. I like that very much. You definitely speak to my heart in some special way. I find it so easy to connect to what you write. I must say, I think you are my favorite blogger that I’ve come across! One of your biggest fans!
~Sarah Katherine
http://Www.thetreauresoflife.com
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O sweetheart, thanks for your kind words.. You truly are inspirational. It gives great pleasure to read your posts too!! That’s how we both could connect so well.. It’s just amazing to have vibes travel from one end of the world to the other to connect two like minded people… loads of love
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You’re very deserving of kind words. It is amazing that simple words can connect people so far apart! Words are magical. More so when in the right person’s hand.
Oh I am tired now, lol. I will say goodnight. Take care! I’ll be waiting for your next post!
~Sarah Katherine
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sure thing.. sleep tight and have a good night… will wait to read from you…
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Reblogged this on mySestina.
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Stage centered, propped for the audience to see, a reenactment of human shortcomings. Everyday occurrence. A failing yet not recognized as such due to values differing and weighed upon different scales. Resulting in prevailing heartbreaks. Good work. Always sneaking up on us. But nonetheless bringing the proverbial punch. What can I wish for you seeing as that you are so good at what you do.
Have a nice day.
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You have described the gist of the poem so well.. I am glad that you find my posts meaningful and thought provoking.. Thank you so much!
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So welcome
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